The name Taylor was chosen at random
It did not get much thought
It sounded good
So, it is what I got
I came to like my name
Though I never did before
As I thought about it
I started to like it more
Taylor originated from Tailor
A person who makes and alters clothes
They are said to repair things
That is when a thought arose
Like a Tailor
I fixed things, too
There was nothing I could not fix
There was nothing I could not do
I fixed a million broken smiles
I healed a million broken hearts
I cleared crowded minds
And entered positive thoughts
I repaired and fixed things
Like a tailor
A name I came to know
Became a part of me
I came to like my name
Though I never did before
As I thought about it
I started to like it more
I loved it it was very thought out
ReplyDeleteI love the rhymes! Great poem because it didn't make me want to cry haha.
ReplyDeleteI liked your rhyme scheme
ReplyDeleteThat was BE.YOU.TEE.FULLL and catchy cx
ReplyDeleteI liked the rhythm and the rhyme of the poem.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you compared your name to something similar, awesome poem.
ReplyDeleteI like the rhyme pattern your poem has it makes it flow and very palatable to the mind.
ReplyDeleteI love all of the smilies and examples you put into it :3
ReplyDeleteI like your poem because that is really creative to think of your name like a tailor, and how you put your life into that name.
ReplyDeleteTaylor, I love the comparison to an actual tailor! Also, did you intentionally veer off of the rhyme scheme in a few stanzas?
ReplyDeleteIn some of the stanzas I did half rhymes
DeleteI like how you compared your name to that of a tailor and showed that you cared for others and how they felt.
ReplyDeleteNice your poem shows that it has a lot of meaning and I like the whay you put your self in the poem
ReplyDeleteIt's interesting to know about your name. You should like your name it's pretty cx ! 💟
ReplyDeleteAre you absolutely, positively, 100% sure there was no reason you were named Taylor when you were born? :D
ReplyDeletenope, my name was chosen at random. 100% random
DeleteDo you think it's you're job to fix people problems. An if so why do you feel that. But I really like your poem.
ReplyDeleteI don't think that its my job to fix people, but I feel that If I can make someones life better, then I am doing the world some justice.
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